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The bass?

I think you should slow down the pace on the drumbeat it goes unce unce unce whilet he melody is a little more settled.
But I like it :)

Stop it!

"You are making the legal claim that it is your own original work."
"If your submission is not your own original work, you will be placed on a rejection list and held responsible for any repercussions."

What the waffle

Damn man, you NAILED IT!
But I have one question, did you use a tutorial or did you steal this? cuz your learning curve just got from 0 to 100.

killerhoofd responds:

i stole this :)

i just put this one in it to download

You know what?

If you make a break in it and put a huuuuge wobblin dubstep bass in there, you would make it fly!

Darth Vader !

Sounds like darth vader rapin' his mask.
I can't really set my finger on if this is scary or not.

Jtec responds:

Thanks, for the comment I will try to make a scary one sooner or later.
I think it has a Start/Pause Menu feel.

The melody

I love the melody in this piece. It's like a person trying to fool / annoy you but only doing it for the fun. I don't know how to explain it :P.
Good job.

killerhoofd responds:

Finally i make you happy with my music ! :D:D

Yoo, you're gettin at it!

Yay! Finally some melody that is noticable !
But instead of the cymbal I would have selected a Snare.
The start is a little rough or empty :P as it is not that interesting to just hear one note every seconds. Try get Some FX's.
If you are a Pie Rat or a Rich person you could get some vengeance sets.

Emptiness = listener will go to sleep

You reaaaaally need a breakthrough in your songs, this is like.. yeah something you would hear when not paying attention to the music, it's not even smoothing because of the beat, and if it would be a chill piece it still needs more elements.
Empty Empty Empty!

killerhoofd responds:

yeah wanna help me ? :P

Mmh, spice it up

Your songs are still veeeery dull!.
Listen to sword99.

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